Saturday, 15 March 2014

Writing - Swimming Sports

WALT: Write to inform
Task: Share my experiences at Russell Street School swimming sports as a recount.

Success Criteria

  • Plan
  • Introduction- Where, When, Who, Why
  • n order
  • Past tense (walked, ran, said)
  • Adding details, think about what are the most powerful words

1 comment:

  1. I am in Kea as well Libby. I can see you used all your ideas from your plan in your story but am wondering if you had more ideas that could have gone into the plan to help make your story longer and more detailed?